雅思G类小作文真题7分范文分析，今天这篇G类7分小作文来自剑14Test1。题目、全文、考官评语、分析如下。下面就请大家跟随小编的脚步一起来看看吧~希望能够帮助到各位小伙伴们哦~
　　保留了原文所有错误，用绿色标出。
　　题目：You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with afamily for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
　　Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
　　Explain why you would like the job
　　Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
　　Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
　　Dear Mr and Mrs Collins,
　　My name is Carola. I have seen your advertisement in a magazine and I’m writing to you because I would like to be considered for the position you are offering. I really would like to work for you because I think it will be a good experience for you and me. I like to travel, know about different cultures and meet new people. I have never been to Australia but I’m pretty sure there a lot of thing to see and try. I have previous experience looking after children. Currently I’m working for an Irish family and I take care of for children whose ages vary from three to eight. I have to say that I’ve never thought that looking after children would be that rewarding. I enjoy spending time with them and I have learnt a lot. I’m really patient, tidy, reliable, and hard working.
　　In addition, I have just completed an first aids course.
　　If I had the chance to live with you would be great. I would spend my free time learning English, visiting turist attractions, trying local food and making new friends.
　　Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. Please feel free to contact me if you need further details and recomendations.
　　Kind regards,
　　Carola
　　（217 words）
　　考官评语：回答呈现了清晰的写信目的，语气前后一致、恰当。清晰、完整地覆盖了题中各个要点，但还可以更详细。信息和观点组织有逻辑，恰当使用了连接词。词汇使用充分展示了灵活性和准确性，使用了搭配the position you are offering, previous experience, rewarding,taking the time to read my letter, contact me, further details.有一些拼写错误，如first aids, turist,recommendations.语法多样，句子通常准确无误。
　　组长补充：
　　1.TR：如考官所述，首先，考生应答语气恰当，使用了正式信相应的开头和落款。组长整理一些同主题信件常用句如下表所示，大家结合中文自行翻译，然后比对原文，加强理解和记忆。
　　同时，考生的回答全面覆盖了题中的三个要求。虽然详尽程度不同，但达到了7分的标准。组长整理考生对三个问题的回答要点如下表所示，大家注意吸收ideas，并对照原文提升英文表达。
　　2.CC：考生恰当地使用了各种连接词来把内容有逻辑的组织起来，如because, but, in addition等。其实组长觉得这篇范文的段落划分可以更好。
　　3.LR：考生使用了很多话题相关语言，除了考官评语中提到的，还包括different cultures, look after, take care of, patient, tidy, reliable, hard working, 以及ages vary from..to..., currently, complete a course,visit tourist attractions, try local food等实用表达。
　　4.GRA：考生综合使用了多种语法和句式，包括各种动词时态、定语从句、If句等。大家注意，动词时态的多种变化，是雅思G类小作文中经常考察也相对容易提高的语法点，注意学习范文中使用了哪些时态，用在什么情况，自己练习时要有意模仿使用。
　　此外，这篇小作文字数偏多，一般来说，实际考试中170-180 words左右比较理想。